Why do you think it is important to save the elephant population? Answer in 5 sentences only.
학생이 쓴 원문
Because it can become extinct.
The reason we have to protect the elephant population is that the elephants must breed so that our descendants can see them later.
It\'s a bit cruel to say, but if there are no elephants, the zoo will be no fun.
Could be a flaw in the food chain.
And elephants are also precious lives.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ji [이름]!
Yes, we really have to protect the endangered animals for the enjoyment of future generations.
It\'s also for the animal kingdom and our environment.
Thank you for sharing your answer!
See you later!
Because it can become extinct.
>>> CORRECT!
The reason we have to protect the elephant population is that the elephants must breed so that our descendants can see them later.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: The reason why we need to protect the elephant population is that elephants must reproduce so that descendants can see them.
It\'s a bit cruel to say, but if there are no elephants, the zoo will be no fun.
>>> It\'s a little cruel to say, but without elephants, zoos would not be fun.
Could be a flaw in the food chain.
>>> CORRECT!
And elephants are also precious lives.
>>> CORRECT!
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