Why do you think it is or is not important to plan your career?
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it is important to plan my career. if I don't make a plan for my career, I will spend time in vain. and my career will be stagnation.
therefore, for better life in the future, we need to make a plan for our career and try to implement the plan.
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it is important to plan my career.
>>>It is important to plan my career.
if I don\'t make a plan for my career, I will spend time in vain. and my career will be stagnation
>>> If I don\'t a plan for my career, I will spend time in vain and my career will be in stagnation.
therefore, for better life in the future, we need to make a plan for our career and try to implement the plan.
>>>Therefore, for better life in the future, we need to make a plan for our careers and try to implement the plan.
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