Why do you think it is that many children don’t like school?
학생이 쓴 원문
Many children don\'t like study because it is boring.
But I like scool because it is very funny and so happy.
I think the most important thing learn at school is play with my friend.
Because play with my friend is good at health and feel so good to me.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your night! :)
~ T. Tricia
Many children don\'t like study because it is boring.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> Many children don\'t like to study because it is boring.
But I like scool because it is very funny and so happy.
>> But I like school because it is a very fun and happy place.
I think the most important thing learn at school is play with my friend.
>> I think the most important thing about going to school is playing with my friends.
Because play with my friend is good at health and feel so good to me.
>> Because playing with my friends is good for the health and it feels so good to me.
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