Why do you think it\'s important to spend time with family? (answer in 3 sentences)
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s very important thing , to my dauther. Depending on how she spent her childhood with her familly.
It will be a great help for her to live a positive life in the world.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your homework, Bella!
Practice will always make a progress so just keep going!
-Hanna ^^
It\'s very important thing , to my dauther.
>>It\'s very important most especially for my daughter.
Depending on how she spent her childhood with her familly.
>>How she spent her childhood with her family plays an important role as she grows older.
It will be a great help for her to live a positive life in the world
>>It will greatly help her to live a positive life in this world.
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