Why do you think kids wear eyeglasses at such a young age?
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I think kids wear eyeglasses at such a young age because they are watching too much tv and playing games.
Some kids don\'t sleep and use a smart-phone until at late night.
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Why do you think kids wear eyeglasses at such a young age?
I think kids wear eyeglasses at such a young age because they are watching too much tv and playing games.
>> I think kids wear eyeglasses at such a young age because they watch TV and play games for too long.
Some kids don\'t sleep and use a smart-phone until at late night.
>> Some kids don\'t sleep and use a smartphone until late at night.
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