Why do you think knowing the president/ CEO of a company is important?
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Hello Sir [이름]!
It\'s a cold Tuesday afternoon. How are you today?
Did you have a busy day? Thank you for doing your homework.
I agree with you. We should know how to deal with our boss.
We should always be professional at work. You did a great job in putting your thoughts into writing. ^^
Please go over the corrections below. See you in class.
Teacher Nina
In today’s business environments, one of qualities that a leader should have is people networking skills.
>> In today\'s business industry, one of the qualities that a leader should have is good at networking skills.
>> OR: Nowadays in business industry, one of the qualities a leader should possess is good interpersonal skills.
Business is all about people.
>> Correct!
It is people who manufacture and sell goods.
>> It is the people who manufacture and sell goods.
And it is people who purchase them.
>> Correct!
Whether it is related to business or personal relationships, our focus should be on people.
>> Correct!
>> Better: Whether it is related to business or personal relationships, our focus should be on the people.
Having said that it would be great if you know as many people as possible.
>> Correct!
It doesn’t matter whether he/she is CEO or an employee of a company.
>> It doesn\'t matter whether he/she is the CEO or an employee of a company.
It would be no harm to know many high profile figures.
>> Correct!
Actually it couldn’t be better if you know many executives.
>> Correct!
It is also important to have a good relationship with your boss as well.
>> Correct!
Sometimes, you have to work with your boss who doesn’t like you or whom you dislike because of his different work style, personalities, or the way of thinking.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Sometimes, you have to work with your boss who doesn\'t like you or whom you dislike because of his different work style, personality, or the way of thinking.
However, there is one skill that is universal to all career paths: managing your boss.
>> Correct!
>> OR: However, there is one skill that applies to all careers and it is dealing with your boss.
Without this skill you\'re not likely to succeed.
>> Correct!
So, you don’t have many choices: leave your boss or be patient
>> Correct!
>> OR: So you don\'t have any other choices, leave your boss or be patient with him/her,
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