Why do you think many Chinese tourist are coming to Korea?

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From a few years ago, the number of Chinese toursit who visits Korea has been increased gradually.

>> A few years ago, the number of Chinese tourists who visit Korea has increased gradually.

I think there are several reasons for this.

>> Correct.
First reason is that Korean drama or song is famous in China.

>>The first reason is that Korean dramas and songs are amous in China.

Thanks to drama and song, many Korean star also began to get popular, which makes Chinese get interested in Korea.

>> Thanks to dramas and music, many Korean stars also began to become popular, which makes Chinese people get interested in Korea.
Second reasons is that Korean\'s cosmetics.

>> The second reason is Korean cosmetics.

Korean cosmetic, especially BB crea, is very famous in China because it is cheaper than other brand cosmetics and its quality is outstanding.
Because of these reasons, I believe that many Chinese come to Korea.

>> Korean cosmetics, especially BB cream, are very famous in China because they are cheaper than other cosmetic brands and their quality is outstanding.
Because of these reasons, I believe that many Chinese come to Korea.

>> Correct.