Why do you think many Koreans hate your country\'s president?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think many Koreans hate our president, the reason is following;
First, he is very friendly to Japan.
Second, he don\'t communicate with the people.
Third, Korean president is not peaceful with North Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jimmy!
Here\'s your corrected essay from last week\'s homework. Please take a look at the corrections and alternative sentences given below. See you soon!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Why do you think many Koreans hate your country\'s president?
I think many Koreans hate our president, the reason is following;
>> I think many Koreans hate our president, the reasons are the following:
>> OR: The reasons that many Koreans hate our president are the following:
First, he is very friendly to Japan.
>> CORRECT~~
Second, he don\'t communicate with the people.
>> Second, he doesn\'t communicate with the people.
Third, Korean president is not peaceful with North Korea.
>> Third, the Korean president is not peaceful with North Korea.
>> OR: Third, the Korean president is not friendly to North Korea.
>> OR: Third, the Korean president does not want to maintain peace with North Korea.
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