Why do you think most schools require the wearing of uniforms? What purpose does it serve?
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1. If students wear school uniforms, they look quite tidy and neat.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: Wearing school uniforms make the students look quite tidy and neat.
2. Every morning, they spend lots of time to pick the clothes up for today, but school uniforms cut the loss time.
>>Every morning, they spend lots of time picking which clothes to wear for today and school uniforms cut the lost time. (or: takes less time to wear)
3. School is for educating, school let students concentrate on studying only.
>> Schools are for educating. The schools let students concentrate on studying only.
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