Why do you think obesity is becoming such a problem in the United States and throughout the world?
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Obesity can lead to constipation and skin diseases, and the risk of various cancers increases.
Obese people should not be blamed or ignored, but their health problems are serious.
I think they should go on a diet with regular exercise for their health.
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Obesity can lead to constipation and skin diseases, and the risk of various cancers increases.
>> CORRECT!
Obese people should not be blamed or ignored, but their health problems are serious.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> Obese people should not be blamed or ignored because their health problems are serious.
I think they should go on a diet with regular exercise for their health.
>> CORRECT!
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