Why do you think peer pressure has a powerful influence on people?
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In student’s case, peer is the most powerful person among relations. Not only students but also adults, peer pressure is quite affect to them. Between them peer pressure has positive and negative functions. Most people share their thought, idea with peers. That’s why peer pressure has a powerful influence.
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>>In a student\'s case, his or her peers are the most powerful (influential) people among all his relations.
2. Not only students but also adults, peer pressure is quite affect to them.
>>Peer pressure not only affects students but also adults.
3. Between them, peer pressure has positive and negative functions.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR:Peer pressure has both positive and negative sides.
4. Most people share their thought, idea with peers.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: We share a lot of our ideas and thoughts with our peers.
5. That’s why peer pressure has a powerful influence.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: The influence of peer pressure on people is truly great.
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