Why do you think people are afraid of ghosts even if they haven\'t really seen one?
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I personally think the reason why people feel afraid of ghosts is an imagination. They can imagine an horrible experience even they have never through. But, the technology has been developing due to the imagination such as car, airplane, smart phone, etc. I believe people can\'t control a fear, they will overcome it via an imagination. :)
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I personally think the reason why people feel afraid of ghosts is an imagination.
>> I personally think the reason why people feel afraid of ghosts is because of their own imagination.
They can imagine an horrible experience even they have never through.
>> They can imagine a horrible experience even though they have never really went through it.
But, the technology has been developing due to the imagination such as car, airplane, smart phone, etc.
>> CORRECT!I believe people can\'t control a fear, they will overcome it via an imagination. :)
>> I believe people can\'t control their fear, they will overcome it via an imagination. :)
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