Why do you think people are so fascinated with aliens?
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Why do you think people are so fascinated with aliens?
People usually like mystery and like to research mysterious facts. And this peoples’ mentality makes them to make some fantasy movies about ailens. One of the most point that people fascinated with them is their anonymity and mysticism. People don’t know their appearance. And we don’t have any their evidence of their existence. Some people make fake videos to make confuse people. I think people like that point of ailens.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Harry!
It\'s another awesome Friday isn\'t it? ^^ Thank you for diligently writing this essay.
I totally agree with your opinion about this matter. It is really fascinating to discover something unknown.
However, I [이름]der if you personally believe in aliens?
Maybe they do exist or maybe they don\'t. I\'ve [이름]dered about that too.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
It\'s another awesome Friday isn\'t it? ^^ Thank you for diligently writing this essay.
I totally agree with your opinion about this matter. It is really fascinating to discover something unknown.
However, I [이름]der if you personally believe in aliens?
Maybe they do exist or maybe they don\'t. I\'ve [이름]dered about that too.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> People usually like mystery and like to research about mysterious facts.
And this peoples’ mentality makes them to make some fantasy movies about ailens.
>> This mentality makes them able to make some fantasy movies about aliens.
One of the most point that people fascinated with them is their anonymity and mysticism.
>> One of the most important point why people are fascinated with them is because of their anonymity and mysticism.
People don’t know their appearance.
>> CORRECT!
And we don’t have any their evidence of their existence.
>> In addition, we don\'t have any evidence of their existence.
Some people make fake videos to make confuse people.
>> Some people make fake videos to confuse people.
I think people like that point of ailens.
>> I think people like that point about aliens.
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