Why do you think people become greedy?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because maybe they think about they want to get something, the spark of their desire is explode. Long ago, someone having very good something like a ring or a necklace, people think that looks good so gradually their desire is getting big. I don\'t know the scientific reason but I feeling the people become very greedy.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daisy. ^_^
Thank you for answering this question.
I agree that being greedy among humans is innate. People usually want to have the things that they don\'t have and that makes them greedy.
Thank you for answering this question.
I agree that being greedy among humans is innate. People usually want to have the things that they don\'t have and that makes them greedy.
I think a little greed is good but too much greed is bad.
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~Teacher Charry
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See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry
>> Maybe it\'s because when they think about the things that they want, they have a very strong desire to get them.
Long ago, someone having very good something like a ring or a necklace, people think that looks good so gradually their desire is getting big.
>> Long ago, when someone has a nice jewelry like a ring or a necklace, other people think that it looks good so their desire to get it gradually becomes greater.
I don\'t know the scientific reason but I feeling the people become very greedy.
>> I don\'t know the scientific reason but I feel that people naturally become very greedy.
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