Why do you think people commit crimes?
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There are many factors that can contribute to criminal behavior. I think poverty is the most important factors. If there is someone too poor, they may steal. Like Jean Valjean. Poverty is a problem for the Government to overcome and solve. They need to solve the problem by creating jobs and increasing welfare.
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There are many factors that can contribute to criminal behavior.
>> Correct!
I think poverty is the most important factors.
>> I think poverty is the most important factor.
If there is someone too poor, they may steal.
>> If someone is too poor, they might steal.
Like Jean Valjean.
>> Correct!
Poverty is a problem for the Government to overcome and solve.
>> Correct!
They need to solve the problem by creating jobs and increasing welfare.
>> They must address the issue by creating jobs and increasing welfare.
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