Why do you think people eat out too often these days?

2019-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Nowadays the family\'s shape is simple. The member is one or two people or at most three families. So cooking in home is expensive more than eating out. Because we don\'t need big portion about food. I have heard that chinese eat out very often. From breakfast to dinner. Many women don\'t cook in home and they are used to eating out. Of course, eating out is not good our health. Cooking in home is more healther that eating out. But nowadays people is very busy, so I think eating out is wiser.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I agree, a lot of people are busy so they prefer to just eat out. People prefer to do easier things these days.

- T. Beth
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Nowadays the family\'s shape is simple.

>>> Nowadays, the family size is getting smaller.
The member is one or two people or at most three families.

>>> The number of people in most household are just one or two, or at most three people.
So cooking in home is expensive more than eating out. Because we don\'t need big portion about food.

>>> So cooking at home is more expensive than eating out because we don\'t need big portions of food.

I have heard that chinese eat out very often.

>>> correct ( I have heard that Chinese eat out very often. )
From breakfast to dinner.

>>> correct
Many women don\'t cook in home and they are used to eating out.

>>> Many women don\'t cook at home and they are used to eating out.

Of course, eating out is not good our health.

>>> correct
Cooking in home is more healther that eating out.

>>> Cooking at home is much healthier that eating out.

But nowadays people is very busy, so I think eating out is wiser.

>>> But nowadays, people are very busy so I think eating out is more convenient.

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