Why do you think people find it hard to quit smoking?
학생이 쓴 원문
Becase smorkers are addicted to nicotine, many harmful substances in cigarettes like drugs. So it takes a lot of effort to quit smoking.
And people wants to lean on something while living in this hard world instead of having religion.
It is a bit different way to look into, However, It depends on how strong is smokers\' willing to quit smoking.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Jenny!
Becase smorkers are addicted to nicotine, many harmful substances in cigarettes like drugs.
>>> Because smokers are addicted to nicotine, one of the many harmful substances in cigarettes, like drugs.
So it takes a lot of effort to quit smoking.
>>> correct
And people wants to lean on something while living in this hard world instead of having religion.
And people wants to lean on something while living in this hard world instead of having religion.
>>> In addition, people want to lean on something while living in this hard world instead of having a religion.
It is a bit different way to look into,
>>> correct
However, It depends on how strong is smokers\' willing to quit smoking.
>>> However, it depends on how strong is smokers\' willingness to quit smoking.
>>> OR: However, it depends on how strong smokers\' willingness is to quit smoking.
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