Why do you think people gossip?

2018-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Gossip is unconstrained and derogatory conversation about other people and can involve betraying a confidence and spreading sensitive information or hurtful judgments. Research shows that people who gossip the most have very high level of anxiety. First of all, I think that people gossip to be superior. If people don't feel good about themselves, they feel better when they judge others negatively. Second, Gossip can be the issues when people don't have things talking about. Third, People gossip to feel as though they are part of the group. It is common for women in Korea to talk about somebody's life and need to react what they think, and have to say something if they would like to participate to conversation. Lastly, when we want to get to be center of attention, we gossip. So people tend to divulging a piece of gossip that should not say. I do not think gossip is wrong but it can be a habit, so people must try not to say gossip about others.

강사 첨삭

Great thoughts, Sir [이름]!

Our thoughts are parallel! There are good and bad sides of gossip, sometimes they could be beneficial, but most of the time they\'re harmful especially if it comes from the tongue of awful people. Our tongue has no bones but it can break a person\'s heart, so let\'s be careful on the words we utter.


~Teacher Eunice 


Gossip is unconstrained and derogatory conversation about other people and can involve betraying a confidence and spreading sensitive information or hurtful judgments.

>>> Gossip is unconstrained, and derogatory conversation about other people, and it can involve betraying confidence and spreading sensitive information or hurtful judgments.

Research shows that people who gossip the most have very high level of anxiety. 

>>> Research shows that people who gossip the most have a very high level of anxiety. 

First of all, I think that people gossip to be superior.

>>> First of all, I think that people gossip to be superiors.

If people don\'t feel good about themselves, they feel better when they judge others negatively. 

>>>Correct!

Second, Gossip can be the issues when people don\'t have things talking about.

>>> Second, gossip can be the issues when people don\'t have things to talk about.
 Third, People gossip to feel as though they are part of the group.

>>> Third, people who gossip to feel as though they are part of the group.

It is common for women in Korea to talk about somebody\'s life and need to react what they think, and have to say something if they would like to participate to conversation.
>>>
It is common for women in Korea to talk about somebody\'s life, and need to react what they think, and have to say something if they would like to participate in the conversation.

Lastly, when we want to get to be center of attention, we gossip. So people tend to divulging a piece of gossip that should not say.
>>> 
Lastly, we gossip if we want to be the center of attention, so people tend to divulge a piece of gossip that we shouldn\'t say. 

I do not think gossip is wrong but it can be a habit, so people must try not to say gossip about others.

>>> I do not think gossip is wrong, but it can be a habit, so people must try not to gossip about others.


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