Why do you think people should or shouldn\'t have hobbies?
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Hello Kate!^^
Thank you for taking the time to make your homework. It\'s a good practice for your writing skills. Take care and have a nice day!^^
Nowadays I feel lonely because my best friends are preparing their weddings.
>>>Nowadays, I feel lonely because my best friends are preparing for their weddings.
And, my boyfriend is far away with me.
>>>And my boyfriend is far away from me.
So I sometimes feel lonely and sad. For overcoming this feeling, I think I should make a hobby.
>>>So sometimes I feel lonely and sad.
For overcoming this feeling, I think I should make a hobby.
>>> In order to overcome this feeling, I think I should make a hobby.
Good hobby will be make me happy and be stable.
>>>A good hobby will make me happy and be stable.
So I am finding for bowling club now.
>>>So I am looking for a bowling club now.
I hope I have good at bowling and enjoy it.
>>>I hope I will be good at bowling and enjoy it.
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