Why do you think people sometimes ignore or overlook others who are smaller or quiete?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course a lot of people feel power and dangerous for bigger or louder people. We feel less burden someone thin or short. We usually say \"louder is winer\" In Korea. But it\'s gonna be hurt if you ignore smaller of quiet people. Don\'t judge by it\'s cover.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Ji Yun. Great job on sharing your thoughts on the homework topic. I hope the corrections I made will be very informative and useful. I wish you a great night and take it easy. Until the next class. ~ Jane :)
Of course a lot of people feel power and dangerous for bigger or louder people.
>> Of course, a lot of people feel powerless and in danger against bigger or louder people.
We feel less burden someone thin or short.
>> We feel bad for someone thin or short.
We usually say \"louder is winer\" In Korea.
>> We usually say \"the louder one wins\" in Korea.
But it\'s gonna be hurt if you ignore smaller of quiet people.
>> But it\'s hurtful if we ignore smaller or quiet people.
Don\'t judge by it\'s cover.
>> Don\'t judge a book by its cover.
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