Why do you think people start smoking? What are possible factors that lead to it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that smoking is a drug.
I think that once someone starts, it\'s difficult to stop.
In South of Korea, people & doctors say smoking is completely harmful and useless.
강사 첨삭
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I think that smoking is a drug.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I think that smoking is like taking a drug.
>>> OR: I think that smoking is addictive like drug.
I think that once someone starts, it\'s difficult to stop.
I think that once someone starts, it\'s difficult to stop.
>>> correct
In South of Korea, people & doctors say smoking is completely harmful and useless.
In South of Korea, people & doctors say smoking is completely harmful and useless.
>>> correct
>>> OR: In South of Korea, people & doctors say smoking is not only harmful, but also useless.
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