Why do you think people stereotype?
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Well, I guess one\'s growing environment could affect the people. For instant, parents dedicated for their family that I\'ve seen through. I can get a stereotype that devotes for my family. On the other hand, getting divorce that I experienced is a common thing for me. I could have a stereotype about the meaningless of my family. Also, I want to tell you about another reason. I think if you\'ve been through something negative or bad, it could lead to stereotypes
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Hello, Eric! ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. ~ T.Gelly
Well, I guess one\'s growing environment could affect the people.
>> Correct!
OR
>> I guess, one\'s growing environment affects people.
For instant, parents dedicated for their family that I\'ve seen through.
>> For instance, parents dedicated themselves to their family as I\'ve seen through.
I can get a stereotype that devotes for my family.
>> I can be a stereotype as well because of my family.
On the other hand, getting divorce that I experienced is a common thing for me.
>> On the other hand, based on my experience, getting divorced is a common thing.
I could have a stereotype about the meaningless of my family.
>> I could stereotype the meaninglessness of my family.
Also, I want to tell you about another reason. I think if you\'ve been through something negative or bad, it could lead to stereotypes
>> Also, the other reason is if a person is going through bad or negative situations, it could lead to stereotyping.
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