Why do you think prices in Korea are high?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
As I said, Real estate price was raised a lot in Korea. so it made to go up rental fee and so store people can not help increasing price of goods. When I visited Vietnam, there is a cheap price of all products in the country. I don\'t know a house price of the country, but I can guess the price of the country is cheaper than Korea. if rental fee is a low price, you can guess products price maybe cheap.
When I was a student in University, I ate food & beer very cheap. but now, it\'s price is over 10 times than 30 years ago.
but my salary increased only 3 times than that time.
In addition, Government Tax increased 10 times too.
I think, young people have no dream now, because they have not chance to make a lot of money as salary man. so they try to buy lotto or Bit coin for one time lucky chance.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]
Sorry I was busy yesterday and today so now is the only time that I can check your composition. See you in a while.
T. DON
Dear [Name],
As I said, Real estate price was raised a lot in Korea. so it made to go up rental fee and so store people can not help increasing price of goods. When I visited Vietnam, there is a cheap price of all products in the country. I don\'t know a house price of the country, but I can guess the price of the country is cheaper than Korea. if rental fee is a low price, you can guess products price maybe cheap.
As I said, Real estate price was raised a lot in Korea. so it made to go up rental fee and so store people can not help increasing price of goods. When I visited Vietnam, there is a cheap price of all products in the country. I don\'t know a house price of the country, but I can guess the price of the country is cheaper than Korea. if rental fee is a low price, you can guess products price maybe cheap.
>> As I said, Real estate price was raised a lot in Korea so it made the rental fee go up and people cannot do anything with the increasing price of
goods. When I visited Vietnam, the price of the products there are cheap. I don\'t know the house price of that country, but I can
guess the price is cheaper than here in Korea. If the rental fee is at a
low price, you can guess that the product\'s price is cheap as well.
When I was a student in University, I ate food & beer very cheap. but now, it\'s price is over 10 times than 30 years ago.
>> When I was a student in University, I ate food & drink beer at a very cheap price but now, its price is over 10 times than 30 years ago.
but my salary increased only 3 times than that time.
>> but my salary has only increased 3 times at that time.
In addition, Government Tax increased 10 times too.
>> In addition, the Government Tax has increased 10 times too.
I think, young people have no dream now, because they have not chance to
make a lot of money as salary man. so they try to buy lotto or Bit coin
for one time lucky chance.
>> I think young people nowadays don\'t have a dream for their future because they have no chance to
make a lot of money as a worker so they try to buy lotto or Bitcoin
for once in a lifetime chance to test their luck.
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