Why do you think some kids are afraid of dentists?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think some kids afraid of dentists because thetools are scary.
And the tools sounds are noisy.
So that\'s why kids afraid of nentist.
I afraid of going of dentist too.
Because the tools and sounds are scary.
These are the reasons why some kids are afraid of going the dentist.
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I think some kids afraid of dentists because thetools are scary.
>> I think some kids are afraid of dentists because the tools are scary.
And the tools sounds are noisy.
>> And the tools\' sounds are noisy.
So that\'s why kids afraid of nentist.
>> So that\'s why kids are afraid of dentists.
I afraid of going of dentist too.
>> I am afraid of going to the dental clinic, too.
Because the tools and sounds are scary.
>> It\'s because the tools and sounds are scary.
These are the reasons why some kids are afraid of going the dentist.
>> These are the reasons why some kids are afraid of going to the dentist.
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