Why do you think some people hate dancing?

2024-03-01 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Because everyone has different tastes. It meens everone has different favorite thing. And I don\'t like dancing. I don\'t like ballet or join dance groups or a K-pop, BTS these thing. These are the some people hate dancing like me.

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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille


Because everyone has different tastes.
>> Some people don\'t like dancing because everyone has different tastes. [Don\'t start a sentence with \"BECAUSE\". T. Camille]
It meens everone has different favorite thing.
>> It means everone has a different favorite thing.
OR >> It means everyone has their own preferences.
And, I don\'t like dancing.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t like ballet or join dance groups or a K-pop, BTS these thing.
>> I don\'t like dancing ballet or joining dance groups, or even K-pop like BTS or other kinds of things.
These are the some people hate dancing like me.
>> These are some reasons why there are people who hate dancing, like me.

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