Why do you think some people remain single?

2021-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I think some peole remain single to escape suppression. living with someone is obeying the rules of living. Also, It is to be considerate. They want to live in their own house enjoying their freedom.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!~

You sound so mature. ^^

This is truly the reality of what people experience.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

~t. Ally

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I think some people remain single to escape suppression.
>> CORRECT!

living with someone is obeying the rules of living.
>> Living with someone means they have to obey the rules of their partner\'s lifestyle.

Also, It is to be considerate.
>> Also, they have to be considerate.

They want to live in their own house enjoying their freedom.
>> They want to live in their own house, and enjoy their freedom.

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