Why do you think space renovations are necessary?
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I think the space renovations make new circumstances to all members. And the space renovations brought a new sensation to them. Maybe they can more passionate to their work area. So I think the space renovations are necessary.
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Hi Miss. [Name] [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I think the space renovations make new circumstances to all members.
>> CORRECT!
And the space renovations brought a new sensation to them.
>> It brings a new sensation to them.
OR >> Space renovations bring a new kind of atmosphere.
Maybe they can more passionate to their work area.
>> Maybe they can work more passionatly in their working area.
OR >> Maybe they can work more passionatly in their working space.
So I think the space renovations are necessary.
So I think the space renovations are necessary.
>> CORRECT!
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