Why do you think that being decisive is very important in achieving your goals?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is so hard to act decisive. Because there are many complex social connections, other opinion and many kinds of thoughts.
So if i want to get the decisiveness, I have no choice to ignore something.
This point is too difficult for me. However, I know that studying now is a big picture for my family and friends.
Consequently, what i have to do is just focus on my work. I think that it is the only way to help my all connections in the future.
I will try to focus and maintain this think. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Great job! I am always glad to hear your thoughts. See you tomorrow.
- T. Gabby :)
It is so hard to act decisive. Because there are many complex social connections, other opinion and many kinds of thoughts.>> It is hard to really be decisive because there are a lot of complex socially connected opinions and thoughts around me.
So if i want to get the decisiveness, I have no choice to ignore something.
So if i want to get the decisiveness, I have no choice to ignore something.
>> So if I want to be decisive, I have to ignore something.
This point is too difficult for me.
This point is too difficult for me.
>> Correct.
However, I know that studying now is a big picture for my family and friends.
>> However, I know that studying is an important matter for my family and friends.
Consequently, what i have to do is just focus on my work.
Consequently, what i have to do is just focus on my work.
>> Consequently, I have to focus on my work.
I think that it is the only way to help my all connections in the future.
>> I think that it\'s the only way to help me with my goals in the future.
I will try to focus and maintain this think. :)
I will try to focus and maintain this think. :)
>> I have to focus and maintain this perspective. :)
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