Why do you think that people in Korea like famous brands?
학생이 쓴 원문
Koreans have a particularly strong comparison with others.
For example, If others have it, I want to repeat it the same way.
That\'s why many people like brands.
For example, Instagram is full of brands.
Chanel, Prada, Nike, etc.
Although there is no difference in quality, they choose a brand.
Also, I select the brand. haha.
However, this is a culture that must be fixed.
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Koreans have a particularly strong comparison with others.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Koreans compare themselves strongly to others.
For example, If others have it, I want to repeat it the same way.
>>For example, if others have it then I would want it the same way.
That\'s why many people like brands.
>>CORRECT
For example, Instagram is full of brands.
>>CORRECT
Chanel, Prada, Nike, etc.
>>There are brands like Chanel, Prada, Nike, and etc.
Although there is no difference in quality, they choose a brand.
>>Although there is no difference in quality, they choose the branded ones.
Also, I select the brand. haha.
>>Also, I choose the branded ones.
However, this is a culture that must be fixed.
>>CORRECT
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