Why do you think that the door company decide to introduce their product this time of the year?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, You misunderstood the stories we had done yesterday.
the baseball and soccer match started at last month without audience because of coronavirus. So, Some teams are putting adult dolls. \"not doors\"
the adults dools are releasd for the adults. If you search that type of product on the website, you can find the aim of that dolls. It is not easy to explain that aims this board.
Anyway, the company offered the dolls got a chance to promote it through exposing it. But many viewers are bla[이름]g the team, why they permit to putting the dolls on the seats as the viewers are teenagers and junior group.
As a result of exposing it, the team had gotten some penalties from the goverment.
강사 첨삭
Hello JM!
Thank you for clarifying what you were explaining as dolls instead of dolls.
I have read the article on the internet and I saw dolls with clothes see[이름]gly cheering for their teams. There was no sexual innuendo when you see them
but the mere fact that they are from a company of sex toys is really inappropriate for children and teenagers. The government was correct to impose
penalties.
With these, I shall see you then in class later.
-T. Donna =)
Actually, You misunderstood the stories we had done yesterday.
>> Actually, you misunderstood the stories we had done yesterday.
the baseball and soccer match started at last month without audience because of coronavirus.
>> The baseball and soccer match started last month without audience because of Corona Virus.
So, Some teams are putting adult dolls. \"not doors\" the adults dools are releasd for the adults.
>> So, some teams introduced adult dolls, not \"doors\". These adult dolls are released for the adults.
If you search that type of product on the website, you can find the aim of that dolls.
>> Correct!
It is not easy to explain that aims this board.
>> It is not easy to explain the board\'s aim.
Anyway, the company offered the dolls got a chance to promote it through exposing it.
>> Anyway,the company got the chance to promote the dolls through exposing it.
But many viewers are bla[이름]g the team, why they permit to putting the dolls on the seats as the viewers are teenagers and junior group.
>> But many viewers are bla[이름]g the team of permitting the showcase of the dolls on the seats as the viewers are teenagers and from the junior group.
As a result of exposing it, the team had gotten some penalties from the goverment.
>> As a result of exposing it, the team had gotten some penalties from the government.
Thank you for clarifying what you were explaining as dolls instead of dolls.
I have read the article on the internet and I saw dolls with clothes see[이름]gly cheering for their teams. There was no sexual innuendo when you see them
but the mere fact that they are from a company of sex toys is really inappropriate for children and teenagers. The government was correct to impose
penalties.
With these, I shall see you then in class later.
-T. Donna =)
Actually, You misunderstood the stories we had done yesterday.
>> Actually, you misunderstood the stories we had done yesterday.
the baseball and soccer match started at last month without audience because of coronavirus.
>> The baseball and soccer match started last month without audience because of Corona Virus.
So, Some teams are putting adult dolls. \"not doors\" the adults dools are releasd for the adults.
>> So, some teams introduced adult dolls, not \"doors\". These adult dolls are released for the adults.
If you search that type of product on the website, you can find the aim of that dolls.
>> Correct!
It is not easy to explain that aims this board.
>> It is not easy to explain the board\'s aim.
Anyway, the company offered the dolls got a chance to promote it through exposing it.
>> Anyway,the company got the chance to promote the dolls through exposing it.
But many viewers are bla[이름]g the team, why they permit to putting the dolls on the seats as the viewers are teenagers and junior group.
>> But many viewers are bla[이름]g the team of permitting the showcase of the dolls on the seats as the viewers are teenagers and from the junior group.
As a result of exposing it, the team had gotten some penalties from the goverment.
>> As a result of exposing it, the team had gotten some penalties from the government.
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