Why do you think that young people like you should travel?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that young people like me should travel because young people have curious about other country\'s traditional things and activities. If I go to abroad,I want to enjoy that country\'s weather and games. As young people,they can enjoy more travel and more activities. Because they know to play activity more.
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I think that young people like me should travel because young people have curious about other country\'s traditional things and activities.
>>> I think that young people like me should travel because young people have curious about other countries\' traditional things and activities.
If I go to abroad,I want to enjoy that country\'s weather and games.
>>> If I go abroad, I want to enjoy that country\'s weather and games.
As young people, they can enjoy more travel and more activities. Because they know to play activity more.
>> Young people can enjoy traveling more because they know how to do and play different activities.
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