Why do you think the “godsaeng” lifestyle has become so popular among young people in South Korea?
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They want to do many things and they envy those who do many things. I don\'t understand why people just envy them when they can do \'godsaeng\'. Perhaps they envy people\'s diligent lives because they don\'t do it themselves.
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They want to do many things and they envy those who do many things. I don\'t understand why people just envy them when they can do \'godsaeng\'. Perhaps they envy people\'s diligent lives because they don\'t do it themselves.
They want to do many things, and they envy those who actually do them. I don’t understand why people choose to envy others when they can live a “godsaeng” life themselves. Maybe they admire the diligence of others because they aren’t putting in the same effort.
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