Why do you think there are so many different languages in the world?

2023-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Wow, it looks like simple and difficult question. It\'s because there are a lot of cultures, traditions, and religions. So, I personally think the language has been affected from the religion. The religion made the member, group, organization.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Wow, it looks like simple and difficult question. 
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because there are a lot of cultures, traditions, and religions. 
>> CORRECT!
So, I personally think the language has been affected from the religion. 
>> So, I personally think the language has been affected by the religion. 
The religion made the member, group, organization.
>> CORRECT!

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