Why do you think traveling is good or impotant?
학생이 쓴 원문
Getting a travel is having another life.
It makes daily life happy and encourage oneself for tomorrow\'s life goal.
I strongly recommand all kinds of travels to my childrens for better life of their future.
But these day, getting a trouble is sincerely limited by corona19 as we know.
I hope treating medicine to be developed asap.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ethan!
Thank you for submitting your answer to me.
Certainly, experiencing travels gives us a different life as we enjoy the world and learn more about it as we go to different places.
Just like you, I also hope that the medicines will be developed and distributed to people asap.
Anyway, right now, let\'s stay healthy as we wait for the time when we can freely travel again. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Going on a travel is having another life.
It makes daily life happy and encourage oneself for tomorrow\'s life goal.
It makes daily life happy and encourage oneself for tomorrow\'s life goal.
>> It makes daily life happy and encourages oneself for tomorrow\'s life goal.
I strongly recommand all kinds of travels to my childrens for better life of their future.
I strongly recommand all kinds of travels to my childrens for better life of their future.
>> I strongly recommend all kinds of travels to my children for a better life in their future.
But these day, getting a trouble is sincerely limited by corona19 as we know.
But these day, getting a trouble is sincerely limited by corona19 as we know.
>> But these days, going on a travel is sincerely limited due to COVID-19 as we know.
I hope treating medicine to be developed asap.
I hope treating medicine to be developed asap.
>> I hope the treating medicine to be developed asap.
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