Why do you think Unless it\'s a matter of constitutionality.is becoming such a problem in the United
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ummmmm... too serious topic
in my opinion about \'why obesity is problem\' , obesity is excues of all disease.
obesity can makes people nothing to do, makes lazy, makes slow.
so directly linked death.
for example if people nothing to do, no more advance about every part like industrial, trade, science, etc
if people became lazy, no energetic no freshness
eventually there is no benefit more and more go to bad
but i really smpathzie that bacame obesity.
one unfair is bacame obesity is easy soooo easy but became thin is sooo hard
Unless it\'s a matter of constitutionality, natually obesity will increase.
in conclusion i think obesity of matter is reason of all illness.
more and more fat people increase, so nowadays become a real problem
we need to manage ourselves
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Hi [이름],
The topic is very serious indeed! ^^ Because I also want to know your opinion about some serious topics:) Thanks for doing your homework.
-Rachel
in my opinion about \'why obesity is problem\' , obesity is excues of all disease so directly linked death.
>> In my opinion, obesity is the root cause of all diseases.
obesity can makes people nothing to do, makes lazy, makes slow.
obesity can makes people nothing to do, makes lazy, makes slow.
>> Because it makes people do nothing; it makes them lazy and slow/ lethargic, so it is directly linked to death.
for example if people nothing to do, no more advance about every part like industrial, trade, science, etc
if people became lazy, no energetic no freshness eventually there is no benefit more and more go to bad
for example if people nothing to do, no more advance about every part like industrial, trade, science, etc
if people became lazy, no energetic no freshness eventually there is no benefit more and more go to bad
>> For example, if people do nothing, there will be no more advances in various areas such as industries, trade, science and others. If people become lazier, there will be no energy and fresh ideas so eventually everything will stop. That is what I meant with death.
but i really smpathzie that bacame obesity.
but i really smpathzie that bacame obesity.
>> But I really sympathize with the obese.
one unfair is bacame obesity is easy soooo easy but became thin is sooo hard
one unfair is bacame obesity is easy soooo easy but became thin is sooo hard
>> First, because it is unfair. One can become obese easily but reducing weight is so difficult to achieve.
Unless it\'s a matter of constitutionality, natually obesity will increase.
Unless it\'s a matter of constitutionality, natually obesity will increase.
>> Unless some regulations are imposed, obesity will increase more.
in conclusion i think obesity of matter is reason of all illness.
in conclusion i think obesity of matter is reason of all illness.
>> In conclusion, obesity is the leading cause of all problems not just physically but in other areas as well.
more and more fat people increase, so nowadays become a real problem
we need to manage ourselves
more and more fat people increase, so nowadays become a real problem
we need to manage ourselves
>> More people are getting fat so it is really a big problem; thus, we need to manage ourselves.
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