Why do you think we have cakes on our birthday?
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Every world people in birthday sweet cake light up a candle ,
pray wiht two hand together make a wish.
Maybe it is a kind of custom .( culture)
Korean eating seaweed soup in birhtday.
It\'s mean live a long life
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Every world people in birthday sweet cake light up a candle ,pray wiht two hand together make a wish.
>>Every person in the world, birthday sweet cakes light up a candle ,pray with two hands together and make a wish.
Maybe it is a kind of custom .( culture)
Maybe it is a kind of custom .( culture)
>>CORRECT!
Korean eating seaweed soup in birhtday.
Korean eating seaweed soup in birhtday.
>>Koreans eat seaweed soup on birthdays.
It\'s mean live a long life
It\'s mean live a long life
>>It means live a long life.
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