Why do you try to help out people? Why do you think you have to go beyond the limit?
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강사 첨삭
Good day Dr.!
I admire you for having a big heart to contribute to the society. Even though your were still a young boy, you do understand the situations of other people. You are truly a natural-born charitable man. Thank you for sharing your story a while back. Talking to you every day is really an eye-opener.
Enjoy the rest of the day!
See you ^^
~T. Eunice
That question was mine.
>> Correct
OR
>> I got that question to myself back when I was a little boy.
I asked the same question to me many times.
>> I asked myself with the same question several times.
At first, I answered to me like that.
>> At first, I answered like this.
“This is because it is fruitful or worthwhile to help out people”
>> This is because it is fruitful or worthwhile to help out people.
OR
>>> This is because it is more fruitful of worthwhile when I give and extend my help to people.
However, I came up with the more fundamental answer.
>> However, I came up with more fundamental answer.
“This is because it was my childhood resolution.”
>> It was because of my childhood resolution.
When I was child, every day my mother and I visited the market streets that were near my house.
>> When I was a child, my mother and I visited the nearby market streets every day.
My mother bought some vegetables and meat for our dinner and I enjoyed the snack that my mother
bought for me.
>> My mother bought some vegetables and meat for our dinner and I enjoyed the snack that my mother had
cooked for me.
Back then, there were always several old moms.
>> Correct
OR
>> Back then, there were old mothers on the street.
They sat on the street and sold their vegetables in small plastic bowl. With young child eyes, they
looked poor.
>> They sat on the street and sold their vegetables in a small plastic bowl.
With young child eyes, they looked poor.
>> They looked poor with their young child\'s eyes.
OR
>> By looking at their young child\'s eyes, you can tell that they are poor.
So, I told my mother “Mom, when I become a grown-up someday, every day I will buy all vegetable
that grand moms are selling, and then, they don’t need to sit and sell them like that.
>> So I told my mother “Mom, when I grow up someday I will buy all the vegetables that those
grandmothers are selling so they don’t need to sit and sell for the whole day.
Come to think of it, I had wanted charity work.
>> If you come to think of it, I always wanted to do charity works.
Unfortunately, when I grow up, I totally forgot my childhood resolution.
>> Unfortunately, when I am all grown up, I totally forgot about my childhood resolution.
I’ve struggled to win the game in a highly competitive society.
>> Correct
But, recently, l asked me the same question again and again and eventually, I found my childhood
resolution.
>> But, I recently asked myself with the same question twice and eventually, I remembered about my childhood resolution.
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