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Finland is environmental advanced nation.
>>Finland is an environmentally advanced nation.
When I think about environment engineering, the major have many root from many country.
>>When I think about the environmental engineering, it has many branches from many countries.
If there is the successful tech, another country takes that and advances suiting their country.
>>If there is a successful technology, another country takes that and adjusts if it is suitable to their country.
Therefore to become expert, I think I need to learn in environmental advanced countries.
>>Therefore, to become an expert, I think I need to study in an environmentally advanced country.
I want to find various job about the major and to extent my job stage in world wide.
>>I want to find various jobs about my chosen major and extend my job range worldwide.
Metropolia university, as Finland\'s largest university of applied sciences, can help me become expert.
>>Metropolia University is Finland\'s largest university of applied sciences. I believe this institution will help me become the person I want to be.
Helsinki is known to environmental model city. I want to learn environmental life style in the city.
>>Helsinki is known for as an environmental model city. I want to learn the environmental lifestyle in that city.
In addition to, Finland is known about advanced education.
>>In addition, Findland is known for its advanced education.
I heard that Finnish students are very smart like Korean students, but Finnish are far more happy when they are studying.
>>I heard that Finnish students are very smart like Koreans, but Finish are far happier when they are studying.
So I have wondered how to learn in Finland since I was young. I want to experience directly in Finnish education place.
>>So I have been dreaming of studying in Finland since I was young. I am eager to experience the education system in that country.
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