Why do you want to be an Aircraft Engineer?
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I found that Aircraft Engineer is a stable job in future and Aircraft Engineer make a lot of money. So i want to be a Aircraft Engineer.
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Hello [이름]!
I agree with you especially nowadays that people are very much interested in traveling.
fighting!
T. Aki~
I found that Aircraft Engineer is a stable job in future and Aircraft Engineer make a lot of money. So i want to be a Aircraft Engineer.
I found that Aircraft Engineer is a stable job in future and Aircraft Engineer make a lot of money. So i want to be a Aircraft Engineer.
>>> I found that Aircraft Engineer is a stable job in future and Aircraft Engineers make a lot of money so I chose ircraft Engineering as my major.
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