Why do you want to learn other languages? What are the benefits of learning them?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want learing other languages. Because It connect my business.
I know more and more speaking the other languge, I get many chace and variation\'s experience.
It will be effact my family, special my daughter.
When I went to China, I couldn\'t speaked English or Chinese.
I need learn languages.
강사 첨삭
I like your eagerness, Soolyn! That quality is already your advantage. All the best!-Faith-
I want learing other languages. Because It connect my business.>> I want to learn other languages because it is connected with my business.
I know more and more speaking the other languge, I get many chace and variation\'s experience.
I know more and more speaking the other languge, I get many chace and variation\'s experience.
>> If I get to know more languages, I will get many chances and various experiences.
It will be effact my family, special my daughter.
>> It will affect my family, especially my daughter in a positive way.
When I went to China, I couldn\'t speaked English or Chinese.
It will be effact my family, special my daughter.
>> It will affect my family, especially my daughter in a positive way.
When I went to China, I couldn\'t speaked English or Chinese.
>> When I went to China, I could not speak English or Chinese.
I need learn languages.
I need learn languages.
>> Therefore, I need to learn other languages.
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