Why does it take a minute to say hello and forever to say goodbye?
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Hello Sir [이름]^^
A fun Tuesday to you!
How is the weather in your city?
It\'s cloudy here in my country.
It is really painful to say goodbye to other people, especially to those we love.
Some people can\'t overcome depression.
There are some people I met before who had difficulty saying goodbye.
We should always think positive in terms of bad situations.
Have a nice day. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
People take a long time to say goodbye before leaving.
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It may be more difficult to bid farewell for those who may not keep in touch often.
>> It may be more difficult to bid farewell to those who may not keep in touch often.
>> OR: It may be more difficult to bid farewell to those people we don\'t keep in touch often.
We don\'t want to hurt people\'s feelings with an abrupt good-bye.
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Saying goodbye can be one of the hardest ordeals a person faces in their lifetime.
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Only in the agony of parting, we look into the depths of love and truly appreciate what we are having to say goodbye to.
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We all sometimes have to say goodbye to something or someone in our lifetimes.
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It is just life’s way of telling us to move on.
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>> OR: It is a way of telling us to keep moving on.
Saying goodbye is a hard and painful task because we rarely leave a place or person we love, part of them we take with us, and leaving a part of ourselves behind.
>> Saying goodbye is hard and painful task because we rarely leave a place or person we love, we take a part of them with us, and leaving a part of ourselves behind.
However, in order to comfort ourselves, let’s think positively.
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Saying goodbye won’t make them disappear.
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Their thoughts remain with us and we know they are still out there.
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Let’s keep in mind that we gained much when we said hello than losing much when saying good bye, although it\'s painful.
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