Why doesn't the woman pay equal to man.?

2010-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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When a man asks a woman for a date, It's very common for a man to pay the whole thing in Korea. I just think It's fair that man could pay the bill on first time or second time they met. However after thid time, I think that they should split the bill. However, It actually doesn't in Korea It feels not good when we have the lunch and she waits for me paying the bill with a indirect glimpse. Of course I could pay the bill but I just believe whoever has more money could pay the bill. That would be I or she. What I can't tolerate at is that some girls no wonder the man should pay all the thing when dating. It doesn't mean I'm very narrow-minded man. I'm just thinking we have to take the consideration of it. I'm not so brave that I couldn't tell her that we can pay half each other.

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Hi there [이름]! I understand your opinion. I guess we have different point of views in life. But anyway, I guess it also depends on your date. Basically, it has been a culture that the man should pay for everything because he is the one asking for a date. Yet nowadays, there are many ladies who give their shares when having a date without the guys asking it. It’s a matter of consideration as you said. Because in my case, I really chip in whenever someone asks me to go out. However, if the guy didn’t want me to pay, then good, but if not, of course it’s understood that he didn’t have much money to pay everything. Actually I don’t care whether I pay or he does, what matters most is the friendship that slowly builds in us. Moreover, thank you for the good composition. Just be cautious of the capitalization of words as well as the usage of punctuation marks. Please be careful with your word choices too as well as the redundancy in your sentences. Keep it up! Have a great day and see you later! Enjoy the weekend! ^_^ T. ABBY Why doesn't the woman pay equal to man.? >> Why don’t women share equally to men when dating? >> Why don’t women pay equally like men when dating? When a man asks a woman for a date, It's very common for a man to pay the whole thing in Korea. >> In Korea, when a man asks a woman for a date, it’s very common for the man to pay all the expenses. >> In Korea, when a man asks for a date to a woman, it’s very usual that the man should pay for all the expenses. I just think It's fair that man could pay the bill on first time or second time they met. >> I think it’s jusf fair that the man would pay for their bills on the first and second time of dating. >> I think it’s just right that the man would pay for the bills on the first and second date. However after thid time, I think that they should split the bill. >> However, on the third time they should start sharing for the payment. >> However, starting on their third date, they should already chip in for all the expenses. However, It actually doesn't in Korea >> But it doesn’t actually happen in Korea. >> Though it doesn’t really happen in Korea.It feels not good when we have the lunch and she waits for me paying the bill with a indirect glimpse. >> It doesn’t feel good when we have lunch together and she just waits for me to pay the bill while she glimpses at me. >> I don’t feel good whenever we have lunch then she glimpses at me while waiting for me to pay our bill. Of course I could pay the bill but I just believe whoever has more money could pay the bill. >> Of course I could pay our bill but I believe that whoever has more money should pay the bill. That would be I or she. >> That would be me or she. >> It’s either me or she does. What I can't tolerate at is that some girls no wonder the man should pay all the thing when dating. >> What I can’t tolerate is when some girls don’t even give concern about the payment when dating. >> What I can’t tolerate is when some girls don’t care at all even if their dates pay for everything.It doesn't mean I'm very narrow-minded man. >> It doesn’t mean that I’m a very narrow-minded man. >> It doesn’t exactly mean that I have a narrow thinking/mind. I'm just thinking we have to take the consideration of it.  >> I’m just thinking of the considerations. >> I just think of the considerations we should take from it.I'm not so brave that I couldn't tell her that we can pay half each other. >> Because I’m not so brave to tell her that she has to share for the bill.

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