Why don’t all mothers feed their babies on breast milk? Isn’t it much better for the baby than milk

2022-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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In the past, many people thought babies should eat milk from their mothers\' breasts. This situation sometimes made discrimination if they didn\'t do that. However, modern humans can learn diverse knowledge about a lot of nutrition. People know powder milk can be instead of humans\'; therefore, some don\'t prefer to give breast milk to babies for their health and future. Thesedays people are very sensitive and try to maintain good body shapes. For these reasons, many mothers don\'t prefer to give their breast milk to the baby. This is because a lot of articles state that breastfeeding can transform the body, such as the spine and shape of the breast. Second of all, powder milk also has enough nutrients for babies as much as breast milk, hence people don\'t need to wear out their bodies. In my opinion, it depends on people\'s decisions and milk powder is more helpful to women.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin!
I got your point regarding breast milk and mother\'s body.  But it is more advisable to give breast milk for infants since it has more antibodies that can help babies.  I guess mothers should think about their babies more than their body.  ^^

~T. Maine

In the past, many people thought babies should eat milk from their mothers\' breasts.
>>Correct.
This situation sometimes made discrimination if they didn\'t do that.
>>This situation sometimes discriminates mothers if they don\'t follow that.
However, modern humans can learn diverse knowledge about a lot of nutrition.
>>However, modern society can learn diverse information about health and nutrition.
People know powder milk can be instead of humans\'; therefore, some don\'t prefer to give breast milk to babies for their health and future.
>>People know that powdered milk can be used instead of breast milk.  Therefore, some don\'t prefer to give breast milk to their infants. 
Thesedays people are very sensitive and try to maintain good body shapes.
>>These days, people are very sensitive and try to maintain good body figure.
For these reasons, many mothers don\'t prefer to give their breast milk to the baby.
>>For these reasons, many mothers don\'t prefer to give their breast milk to their babies.
This is because a lot of articles state that breastfeeding can transform the body, such as the spine and shape of the breast.
>>Correct.
Second of all, powder milk also has enough nutrients for babies as much as breast milk, hence people don\'t need to wear out their bodies.
>>Second of all, powdered milk also has enough nutrients for babies as much as breast milk.  Hence people don\'t need to wear out their bodies.
In my opinion, it depends on people\'s decisions and milk powder is more helpful to women.
>>In my opinion, it depends on people\'s decisions.  It is factual that breast milk is best for babies, but milk powder is more convenient for mothers.

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