Why don`t you work out?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Why don`t you work out?
Working out is good for our heath. The regular exercise is to stay healthy as well as to keep the sound mind. So I try to work out every
day.
2. Where is it best to do some work out?
There are many place. The play ground and assembling sports equipment are good places. and the gym is good where to work out for
indoor activity. I usually go to the mountain for hiking or go to the Han river side for walking.
강사 첨삭
Hi Huje,
Thank you again for sharing your ideas.
Keep up the good work!
Teacher Elly.
Why don`t you work out?
1. Why don`t you work out?
Working out is good for our health.
Working out is good for our health.
CORRECT!
or>>Working out keeps us healthy.
The regular exercise is to stay healthy as well as to keep the sound mind.
>>Having a regular exercise keeps us healthy as well as it gives us a sound mind.
So I try to work out every day.
CORRECT!
or>>So I try to exercise on a daily basis.
2. Where is it best to do some work out?
There are many place.
2. Where is it best to do some work out?
There are many place.
>>There are many places.
The play ground and assembling sports equipment are good places.
>>Playgrounds and sports centers are good places to workout.
and the gym is good where to work out for
indoor activity.
indoor activity.
>>And the gym is a good place to do some
indoor activities.
indoor activities.
I usually go to the mountain for hiking or go to the Han river side for walking.
>>I usually go to the mountain for a hike or I go for a walk to the Han river.
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