Why Donuts Are So Popular
학생이 쓴 원문
Donuts are so popular around the world because of three reasons: well-matching with a cup of coffee, making people feeling better and many tastes. First, donuts taste better with a cup of coffee. Donuts are usually so sweet that it matches well with bitter coffee. They remove mutual disadvantages so that people can enjoy them continuously. Second, sugar in donuts can make people uplifting. Sweet things vitalize us physically and mentally, and one of the sweet things is a donut. Lastly, donuts have lots of tastes so that consumers can choose donuts that fit their preferences. Nowadays, there are so many tastes that they can satisfy all preferences of the world. By the way, I like the original donut of Krispy Kreme or donuts with full of chocolate filling. When I eat them, I feel guilty since they are too sweet that I can gain weight, but they still satisfy me with delicious flavor.
강사 첨삭
My mouth started watering as soon as I read your composition, Su [이름]. :D
Thank you!
This was very fun to read, not to mention full of wonderful facts. ^^
You\'re still young, and you exercise a lot, so I think you\'ll be able to lose whatever weight you gain from eating. ^^
~t. Ally
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Donuts are so popular around the world because of three reasons: well-matching with a cup of coffee, making people feeling better and many tastes.
>> Donuts are so popular around the world because of three reasons: it matches well with a cup of coffee, it makes people feel better and it has many tastes.
First, donuts taste better with a cup of coffee.
>> CORRECT!
Donuts are usually so sweet that it matches well with bitter coffee.
>> CORRECT!
They remove mutual disadvantages so that people can enjoy them continuously.
>> CORRECT!
Second, sugar in donuts can make people uplifting.
>> Second, sugar in donuts can make people feel uplifted.
Sweet things vitalize us physically and mentally, and one of the sweet things is a donut.
>> CORRECT!
Lastly, donuts have lots of tastes so that consumers can choose donuts that fit their preferences.
>> CORRECT!
Nowadays, there are so many tastes that they can satisfy all preferences of the world.
>> CORRECT!
By the way, I like the original donut of Krispy Kreme or donuts with full of chocolate filling.
>> By the way, I like the original donut of Krispy Kreme or donuts filled with chocolate.
When I eat them, I feel guilty since they are too sweet that I can gain weight, but they still satisfy me with delicious flavor.
>> CORRECT!
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