Why english fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because i want to work at Daycare center or Dance instructor when i go to Canada.
It’s important to speak fluency when i teach someone.
So i think it’s necessary when i talk, teach or live.
it’s important to me.
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Because i want to work at Daycare center or Dance instructor when i go to Canada.
>>> It is because I want to work at a daycare center or as a dance instructor when I go to Canada.
It’s important to speak fluency when i teach someone.
It’s important to speak fluency when i teach someone.
>>> It’s important to speak fluently when I teach someone.
So i think it’s necessary when i talk, teach or live.
So i think it’s necessary when i talk, teach or live.
>>> correct (So I think it’s necessary when I talk, teach or live.)
It’s important to me.
It’s important to me.
>>> correct
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