Why Fintech?
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I am drawn to the democratization of the fintech industry. Lowering access allowed financial data to be accessible on a more open platform. Also, a more transparent and straightforward way to transact the data enabled efficiency. In my current role, my job is to provide customer advice based on corporate software data. This nature enabled the client to access the same data simultaneously and utilize the source by incorporating it into their business strategy. I believe Bloomberg positioned as a \"distributor\" and \"innovator\" for financial market data. Updating many financial sources into a one-stop and integrated platform allowed it to be accurate, fast, and relevant. For example, Bloomberg anywhere enabled access to market data by lowering barriers using the phone, Apple watches, and computers. Also, alternative data source allows clients to incorporate Twitter into investment strategies. These features empowered clients to differentiate between market-moving data and rumors.
강사 첨삭
I am drawn to the democratization of the fintech industry.
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Lowering access allowed financial data to be accessible on a more open platform.
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Also, a more transparent and straightforward way to transact the data enabled efficiency.
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In my current role, my job is to provide customer advice based on corporate software data.
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This nature enabled the client to access the same data simultaneously and utilize the source by incorporating it into their business strategy.
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I believe Bloomberg positioned as a \"distributor\" and \"innovator\" for financial market data.
>>> I believe Bloomberg is positioned as a \"distributor\" and \"innovator\" for financial market data.
Updating many financial sources into a one-stop and integrated platform allowed it to be accurate, fast, and relevant.
>>> correct
For example, Bloomberg anywhere enabled access to market data by lowering barriers using the phone, Apple watches, and computers.
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Also, alternative data source allows clients to incorporate Twitter into investment strategies.
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These features empowered clients to differentiate between market-moving data and rumors.
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