why go to school is early.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think go to school early is important.
That is because when I go school late, I can be punished.
My second reason is when I go to school early, I can play early in school.
My third reason is when I go to school early, my teacher loves me.
Finally, I can have proud of students.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Please
review the corrections and congratulations for doing a good job.
- Teacher Debbie
>> I think going to school early is important.
That is because when I go school late, I can be punished.
My second reason is when I go to school early, I can play early in school.
My third reason is when I go to school early, my teacher loves me.
Finally, I can have proud of students.
That is because when I go school late, I can be punished.
>> That is because when I go to school late, I can be punished.
My second reason is when I go to school early, I can play early in school.
>> My second reason is when I go to school early, I can play early.
My third reason is when I go to school early, my teacher loves me.
>> This is a good sentence.
Finally, I can have proud of students.
>> Finally, I can be proud as a student.
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