Why I applied to Graduate school of Education.
학생이 쓴 원문
Now I teach middle school students in English academy. I have an experience teaching a student who has no motivation on English learning itself. I tried several methods to help her focus on class. For example, I tried to draw her schematic knowledge and connect it with the topic of lecture. In grammar class, I used top-down and bottom up processing in order not to make boring grammar lecture. These methods were able to derive student\'s attention temporarily. I thought deeply and realized the student was lack of integrated motivation. As integrated motivation leads students to continuous learning, I want to investigate deeply on the integrated motivation in Graduate school.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! Thank you for the time you gave to answer the homework. Well done for the advanced vocabulary words you used here. Keep it up! Happy weekend!-Faith-
Now I teach middle school students in English academy. >> Now I teach middle school students in an English academy.
I have an experience teaching a student who has no motivation on English learning itself.
>> I have an experience teaching a student who has no motivation for English learning itself.
I tried several methods to help her focus on class.
>> CORRECT
OR I used different approaches to help her focus on class.
For example, I tried to draw her schematic knowledge and connect it with the topic of lecture.
>> For example, I tried to draw her a schematic diagram and connect it with the topic of our lecture.
In grammar class, I used top-down and bottom up processing in order not to make boring grammar lecture.
>> In grammar class, I used top-down and bottom up processing in order not to make a boring grammar lecture.
These methods were able to derive student\'s attention temporarily.
>> CORRECT
I thought deeply and realized the student was lack of integrated motivation.
>> I thought deeply and realized the student lacked integrated regulation motivation.
As integrated motivation leads students to continuous learning, I want to investigate deeply on the integrated motivation in Graduate school.
>> As integrated regulation leads students to a continuous learning, I want to investigate the subject in graduate school.
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