Why I disagree about boy got a long hair.
학생이 쓴 원문
I will disagree about boy got a long hair.
That is because when boy got a long hair, they can be teased.
My second reason is when boy got a long hair in summer, it can be very hot
My third reason when boy got a long hair, it is not a fit.
Finally, that is not possible to boys are having long hair with out of the plastic surgery.
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>> I disagree about boys having long hair.
That is because when boy got a long hair, they can be teased.
My second reason is when boy got a long hair in summer, it can be very hot
That is because when boy got a long hair, they can be teased.
>> That is because they can be teased by their classmates if they have long hair.
My second reason is when boy got a long hair in summer, it can be very hot
>> My second reason is it can be hot in summer when their hair is long.
My third reason when boy got a long hair, it is not a fit.
>> My third reason is long hair doesn\'t fit boys.
Finally, that is not possible to boys are having long hair with out of the plastic surgery.
>> Finally, it is impossible for boys to have long hair without undergoing plastic surgery.
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